Clean Up list
00:03: adjust the motion of the right hand – too slow/ add an arc
00:04: Jake pops into walk cycle, need a few key frames and slow down the walk slightly
00:16: right hand flips out needs closer
00:15: flips a little to fast
00:19-00:20 : left hand moves down too fast
00:20 – 00:27: shoulders are too rigid, they need more dimension in the movement, some micro anticipation
00:28:Jake's left hand/arm moves too far back, it needs bringing forward
00:02: push isn’t clear, it needs less time more impact and it looks to floaty for the character
00:40: arm vector moves around too much, it needs holding in one place.
00:39-00:41: body pops out when looking to the right, i needs a pause in between the looking over shoulder.
00:50-00:53: poses are a little obscure, need retouching to be more believable, although it does work with the timing. Right hand pose is unnatural, needs to be put into right pose.
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